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Joe W.
Posts : 953
Age : 27
 |  Subject: Make It Through Mon Aug 30, 2010 7:50 pm | |
| Here's a song I have been writing for the past few days. Hope you all like it. Make It Through
By Joe W.
You're so occupied, looking for what's new,
always scanning the world that's around you,
realizing that you're not up to date,
going after everything in this life
until nothing seems to be enough and
you're staring at the ground
failing to see His love through it all
You're only fourteen.
Is this how it's gonna be?
Everything around you is a necessity.
Chorus:
All you really need is God's love.
It's falling down on you and me from up above.
Never let him be separated from you,
but with His help you’ll make it through.
Those years have faded.
Well now, you've just turned eighteen
and gained almost everything,
but when you made efforts to have it all
something always seems to be missing.
Just ask God to shine his light.
He'll show you the way.
It's gonna be alright.
Chorus 2x
Last edited by Joe W. on Tue Aug 31, 2010 11:53 am; edited 1 time in total |
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Jeremy C.
Admin
Posts : 320
Age : 28
| | Subject: Re: Make It Through Mon Aug 30, 2010 8:47 pm | |
| Looks great Joe! So when do you think you'll have the music for it done? |
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Joe W.
Posts : 953
Age : 27
| | Subject: Re: Make It Through Mon Aug 30, 2010 8:57 pm | |
| Sometime Wednesday. If I get done early, it will be done at 12:00 PM. |
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Jeremy C.
Admin
Posts : 320
Age : 28
| | Subject: Re: Make It Through Mon Aug 30, 2010 9:04 pm | |
| Noon or midnight? !2:00 PM can be interpreted as either one.
Either way, I can't wait to hear it. |
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Joe W.
Posts : 953
Age : 27
| | Subject: Re: Make It Through Mon Aug 30, 2010 9:24 pm | |
| Noon. I might record myself singing it and fix my voice up. |
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Jeremy C.
Admin
Posts : 320
Age : 28
| | Subject: Re: Make It Through Mon Aug 30, 2010 9:36 pm | |
| - Joe W. wrote:
- Noon. I might record myself singing it and fix my voice up.
By that he means, after he sings it, he'll send it to me where I will auto-tune it in GarageBand. lol |
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Joe W.
Posts : 953
Age : 27
| | Subject: Re: Make It Through Mon Aug 30, 2010 9:39 pm | |
| Exactly! I think I'll just record myself just saying the words and then you auto-tune it to the melody I made. Hope it doesn't sound too weird. |
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PadrePio222
Posts : 1005
Age : 28
| | Subject: Re: Make It Through Tue Aug 31, 2010 10:01 am | |
| It does all you need now is the notes!  |
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Joe W.
Posts : 953
Age : 27
| | Subject: Re: Make It Through Tue Aug 31, 2010 11:52 am | |
| I getting to that. I've already started this morning in fact! |
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PadrePio222
Posts : 1005
Age : 28
| | Subject: Re: Make It Through Wed Sep 01, 2010 7:06 am | |
| Cool! If you need help feel free too ask! God Bless! |
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Joe W.
Posts : 953
Age : 27
| | Subject: Re: Make It Through Wed Sep 01, 2010 10:59 am | |
| I got a hold of some Christian people off the internet asking them their opinion on what I wrote. |
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Joe W.
Posts : 953
Age : 27
| | Subject: Re: Make It Through Wed Sep 01, 2010 4:27 pm | |
| Here's the beat for the beginning of the song. |
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PadrePio222
Posts : 1005
Age : 28
| | Subject: Re: Make It Through Wed Sep 01, 2010 7:53 pm | |
| Nice beat! |
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Joe W.
Posts : 953
Age : 27
| | Subject: Re: Make It Through Wed Sep 01, 2010 7:56 pm | |
| I think It's a cool beginning. I'll send you "Obamanation" in a PM. |
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PadrePio222
Posts : 1005
Age : 28
| | Subject: Re: Make It Through Tue Sep 14, 2010 3:33 pm | |
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Joe W.
Posts : 953
Age : 27
| | Subject: Re: Make It Through Wed Sep 15, 2010 11:49 am | |
| Jeremy, should we make it a rule banning 1-word posts from the forum? |
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PadrePio222
Posts : 1005
Age : 28
| | Subject: Re: Make It Through Tue Apr 26, 2011 5:07 pm | |
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